Together Poem by SharonAnn Dawson

Together

Rating: 2.8


Hold on tight
Bumpy ride
Cold at night
Hold on tight
Spread you wings
Fly away
Come back to me, don't
Spread your wings
Change is inevitable
Don't change
Not with me
Change is avertable
Be still
My lonesome heart
Be still
My dejected heart
Be still
My unsettled heart
Won't be still
Beats faster as
We hold on tight
We spread our wings
We change.
Together

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 01 February 2015

lovely presentation. enjoyed very much this heart to heart conversation.

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Lyn Paul 01 February 2015

I too loved the flow of these words. Thank you

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Kim Barney 01 February 2015

Very nice, but you might want to change line five to spread YOUR wings.

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 February 2015

very nice.loved the flow and concept.

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Valerie Dohren 18 April 2012

Lovely poem - concise and well written.

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