To Moon Poem by Catrina Heart

To Moon

Rating: 3.1


The moon renounced to dawn and vanish its waning shine.
She conceded one fray to lose, to win another gasp of time.

Reflection seen on the streams of swirling pools,
There a shadow was hidden behind the twigs of wood keens.

Moon played the strings mellow yet deceiving
As jackals’ lingered for a big gorge at herald’s wave.

Pool within pool, snare within snare, a quick mud
Beyond the desire touch, Venus fly trap sneaks on ground.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akram Awadat 08 October 2009

beautiful liens, well done

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Rafique Farooqi 10 October 2009

Beautiful landscape of moonlight.........soft sweet and serene

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 10 October 2009

Pool within pool, snare within snare, a quick mud Beyond the desire touch, haaaa. shan

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Surya . 10 October 2009

aonderful and imaginative poem.good imagery.nice poem dear cat voted10 surya

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

Interesting piece of work. enjoyed reading it!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 September 2018

I always enjoy poems about the moon. Thanks!

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Chinedu Dike 09 January 2017

Beautiful rendition of words. An insightful poem elegantly brought forth in heightened poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 May 2016

Moon played the strings mellow yet deceiving As jackals’ lingered for a big gorge at herald’s wave. such a fine poem...... use of words is powerful and images used are telling...... just fine. thank you very much. tony

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Souren Mondal 09 March 2016

It is such a beautiful poem.. The inagery is exquisite.. I wish you were still active at PH. If you ever see this then thanks for sharing.

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Ency Bearis 20 October 2009

interesting....fine poetic stanzas..nice poem....10

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