The Wedding Poem by lady grace

The Wedding

Rating: 4.7


i wake up early dawn
to witness the changes in sky
from darkness to morn
for a new bride tonight..

the pain is still here
with sadness and anger
today may be the end
tomorrow is never a fine..

this man who'll be my groom
is as good as Homer
a monster from the north
captured me as his lover..

i never love this man before
but he never let me go
he give me no freedom
only to find..i love him too....

for all those days of confusions
my hours filled with loneliness
all i see is his perfect love
a true love which is always the best...

perhaps it's just a fair
to think that i am a bride to be
morning comes with no illusion
a celebration for wedding anniversary..

and as the ceremony starts
my eyes filled with tears
he is lying in white satin
while everybody stands with me...

today...as we celebrate our anniversary
no other words i can say
i love you so much
'happy silver wedding anniversary'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Plumb Plumb 15 June 2009

I celebrate my fiftieth wedding anniversay on th 20th of this month.Sometimes marriage is very hard.

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 June 2009

A great poem where in the human emotions are expressed with out any inhibitions. Kudos.

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Raghavan Warrier 16 June 2009

A beautiful poem. I wonder how many thousands of poems are already written on the subject of love. But this haunting piece (with a touch of feeling similar to 'Wuthering Heights') with contrasting imagery and an unexpected ending convinces me that beautiful poems can still be written by a highly creative mind.

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Sadiqullah Khan 16 June 2009

You are already a star, grace, what if we comment or not, still the joy of reading this piece was immense.10

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Salu Salu 21 June 2009

you simply make magic in writing.....so vividly narrates..and you had all the hearts screwed up................ salu.

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Adeeb Alfateh 09 June 2019

for all those days of confusions my hours filled with loneliness all i see is his perfect love a true love which is always the best... great write 10+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Camagu Somana 26 September 2018

lady grace i love your poem...

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 17 November 2017

so nice one i read it keep it up and do some good poems on love and lust

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Hirak Mishra 21 October 2017

Fantastic

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Eyan Desir 24 April 2010

Well happy annivery indeed... good write

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