The Pain Poem by rhiannonm franklin

The Pain

Rating: 4.7


the pain that you feel,
but cant touch.
a pain you know of,
but cant explain
a pain so feirce
you go insane
the unknown pain
that clutches your heart
and burns in your soul
the pain
in your life
to strong to carry on
the unknown pain
that clouds your mind
and devours your every thought
the pain of broken promises
broken dreams
the pain
thats unheard of
the pain that's
not seen

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katrina DeLee 20 December 2006

i completely understand this pain, great writing!

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Carrie Salazar 09 January 2007

i understand the pain that ur writing about. carrie

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Ebone' Ingram 12 January 2007

i'm living this pain at the moment...it's a great piece.

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Rebeca Valenzuela 04 February 2007

i know the way that you are feeling because thats the way that i feel most of the time.

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Corey Russell 13 December 2006

sadly...i know this pain...it stratches at the soul intill nothing is left...

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pain and its negative factors is a subject of poem and I liked the poem.

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Sabrina Helphrey 08 June 2008

i can relate to your poem very well. i hate to admit it, but i'm going through those exact feelings. it's so hard to describe, but u did so well explaining it. you are talented

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Sarah Trook 14 August 2007

this poem is discriptive yet it cannot fully describe pain of the emotions.the pain only God can free us of. but who can? As far as I can tell you did a fantastic job.

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Leila K 12 March 2007

Amazing... you took the words right out of my heart... so much pain: (

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Sheena Schultz 03 March 2007

I like the way u wrote this poem, its put together very well.

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