The Language Of Water Poem by Dónall Dempsey

The Language Of Water

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THE LANGUAGE OF WATER


You wait by the lake
alone

except for your self
&
your reflected self

as if the landscape
dreamt you up.

Your thoughts a flock of birds
scattered across the failing light.

Clouds laugh
run along the ground
on tiny unseen feet.

Trees stand on their heads
wriggling their toes in the air

& you
become as two

both real & unreal

as if a living
dream.

You hum
Pachabel's Canon

as sun & horizon
listen.

Not bad for a human
they both agree.

It's as if
I need a key

to enter this magical
dimension

as if I have to
invent one

...a magical one.
I take a little stone

whisper to it the secrets
of flight

and teach it how to say: "Splash! "
in the language of water.

The little stone
transformed with its new knowledge

does as it is told

shatters
this mirror world

opens
the dream

and I enter
bewitched

as any fairytale
Prince

my voice
calling your sweet name

with longing

you turn
& we embrace

kiss
& look upon ourselves

as the dream
remakes itself

stitching itself
together with silence.

An old artist
(unknown to us then)

places us
the lovers

at the center
of his composition

adds this
final brushstroke

and pleased
with his efforts

folds up
his chair

packs up
his paints & easel

smiles at our
kisses

wishes
us a goodnight

and is gone
eaten by the twilight.


Our laughter
frail & fragile

lingering on the night air

playing peek-a-boo
with the moonlight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Margery Rehman 25 August 2007

Very evocative.Delightful. Regards, Margery R.

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Faye Facer 24 August 2007

Well written. Good use of phrases. Inspiring read.

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Scarlett Treat 24 August 2007

beautiful.....beautiful.....beautifully beautiful, from the first images of being alone except for the image in the water to the last peek-a-boo with moonlight.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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