Sweet Sting Poem by Howard The Motivational Poet Simon

Sweet Sting

Rating: 4.8


I know a damsel as beautiful as a bee
She never stung anyone except me
Her lips are made of honey and spice
She is my beloved and smother than ice
My heart forever buzzes for my bee

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V P Mahur 20 July 2014

Dear poet, If a bee is so lovely why can not one buzz around her. Sweet write. Thanks a lot for nice appreciation.

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Clarence Prince 26 July 2014

While your is buzzing for your bee, try and avoid her stings and enjoy the rice! Well done, blessings to you!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 January 2013

A nice lovely rhymin poem so enjoyable. Do read mine too.

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Marieta Maglas 17 January 2013

Beautiful poem, Howard. The pure love is the right and the best path to God.Enjoyed reading your poem.God bless.

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Danny Draper 12 March 2013

Succinct declaration of love for your queen bee.

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Lyn Paul 28 January 2018

A sweet tasting sting.

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Nosheen Irfan 25 January 2016

Sweet sting...what a paradox. The title is very captivating and equally captivating are the lines that follow. My heart forever buzzes for my bee...Artfully written. Love the B sound.

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Patricia Grantham 03 April 2015

Your poem is as sweet as the honey. One have been stung many times by love. How adoring this is.

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* Sunprincess * 18 October 2014

........oh this is beautiful and sweet as honey :)

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Sj Holland 18 August 2014

Hi Howard: I like the simple, short, sweetness of this verse. This line I could not grasp, ...She is my beloved and smother than ice... Thanks for reading my poem Birds Again.

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