Evie Shockley

Nashville / Tennessee / United States
Evie Shockley
Nashville / Tennessee / United States
Thursday, October 23, 2014

— Shall Become As — Comments

Rating: 4.2
you put this pen
in my hand and you
take the pen from you put this pen

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Evie Shockley
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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 January 2021
...tied in a parallel that promises our eyes to merge... what a wonderful promise of possibility in impossibility! . Then you put fathers on my palm... the poet extends his/her dream beond empyrean. A wonderful poem!
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Happiness Edeh 22 August 2020
Nice poem. Thanks for sharing
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 27 September 2019
Evie Shockley is very new to me. I like the beginning of the poem. How creative! I am looking forward to read more of her poems.
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Cynthia Deon 27 September 2019
Beautiful. Simply superb.
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Anil Kumar Panda 27 September 2019
A beauty that i like to read again and again. Thanks for sharing. 'after the mountains breathe their mint-and-sorrow green against the long summer sky, they burst into hot october laughter, lighting the horizon with citrus, rust, and blood.'... is so beautiful.10++
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Dr Antony Theodore 27 September 2019
we approach endlessly like two rails of one track, tied in a parallel that promises our eyes to merge, someplace far off in the distance... very fine imagination and lovely poem. tony
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Uche Nwanze 27 September 2019
' the moon seems full, what is missing is a dark hungry sickle, the silver of shadow eating'. A beautifully crafted piece.
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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 September 2019
boundary we approach endlessly like two rails on one track, tied in a parallel" Of life and bondage. A well deserved classic poem of the Day.
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Mahtab Bangalee 27 September 2019
the sliver of shadow eating us up inside. after the mountains breathe their mint-and-sorrow green against the long summer sky, ............/// excellent poetic writings
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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 November 2018
First of all CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as Modern Poem Of The Day. Hurray! This is an amazing poem with a powerful message. The Beauty in this poem is shining through and through, as the poetess herself. God's Blessings in Abundance be upon you and your beloved family, dear Poetess. Amen. With the very best wishes, sincerely Sylvia Frances Chan, Dutch poetess.
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Britte Ninad 27 September 2018
everything is going to change- after the mountains breathe their mint-and-sorrow green against the long summer sky,
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2018
Against the long sunmer sky! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2018
we approach endlessly like two rails of one track, tied in a parallel that promises our eyes to merge, someplace far off in the distance........touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem.
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Mahtab Bangalee 27 September 2018
wow superb, great, outstanding writings- like to quote the moon seems full. what is missing is a dark hungry sickle, the sliver of shadow eating /// she is really another great one Poetess of America
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Ranak Zaman 25 April 2016
it's nice :) 'we approach endlessly like two rails of one track, tied in a parallel that promises our eyes to merge, someplace far off in the distance. you put this feather in my palm. my fingers close around flight.'
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Ranak Zaman 25 April 2016
It's nice. Carry on dear.
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