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...tied in a parallel that promises our eyes to merge... what a wonderful promise of possibility in impossibility! . Then you put fathers on my palm... the poet extends his/her dream beond empyrean. A wonderful poem!

Nice poem. Thanks for sharing

Evie Shockley is very new to me. I like the beginning of the poem. How creative! I am looking forward to read more of her poems.

Beautiful. Simply superb.

A beauty that i like to read again and again. Thanks for sharing. 'after the mountains breathe their mint-and-sorrow green against the long summer sky, they burst into hot october laughter, lighting the horizon with citrus, rust, and blood.'... is so beautiful.10++

we approach endlessly like two rails of one track, tied in a parallel that promises our eyes to merge, someplace far off in the distance... very fine imagination and lovely poem. tony

' the moon seems full, what is missing is a dark hungry sickle, the silver of shadow eating'. A beautifully crafted piece.

boundary we approach endlessly like two rails on one track, tied in a parallel" Of life and bondage. A well deserved classic poem of the Day.

the sliver of shadow eating us up inside. after the mountains breathe their mint-and-sorrow green against the long summer sky, ............/// excellent poetic writings

First of all CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as Modern Poem Of The Day. Hurray! This is an amazing poem with a powerful message. The Beauty in this poem is shining through and through, as the poetess herself. God's Blessings in Abundance be upon you and your beloved family, dear Poetess. Amen. With the very best wishes, sincerely Sylvia Frances Chan, Dutch poetess.

everything is going to change- after the mountains breathe their mint-and-sorrow green against the long summer sky,

Against the long sunmer sky! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

we approach endlessly like two rails of one track, tied in a parallel that promises our eyes to merge, someplace far off in the distance........touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem.

wow superb, great, outstanding writings- like to quote the moon seems full. what is missing is a dark hungry sickle, the sliver of shadow eating /// she is really another great one Poetess of America

it's nice :) 'we approach endlessly like two rails of one track, tied in a parallel that promises our eyes to merge, someplace far off in the distance. you put this feather in my palm. my fingers close around flight.'

It's nice. Carry on dear.