Sad Poem by Cristina Geanta

Sad

Rating: 3.2


sad for all the time my embrace was empty of you
sad for being stubborn to be sad
sad for touching objects baring your presence
sad for not touching you...

sad for re adi ng your name everywhere i turn
sad for all the blue jackets other men should not have worn
sad for all my weak spots left to be weak
sad to open my eyes in the morning

sad for a cruel truth not even dreams can survive
sad without dreaming
sad of nothing to hope for
sad for still seing beautiful things worth for you to know

sad...
just what she is not

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joyce Mwicaly 28 August 2011

I lyk the way you've brought it out so creatively...

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Megan Du Toit 24 March 2009

WOW! ! I write all the time and i have felt that exact same way and i have never been able to describe it as beautifully and as honestly... It is like you cut me open and read my life story. Thanks

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Gad Ashther 24 January 2012

U got sadness and transformed it to something beautiful [3

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Existential Despair 10 April 2009

A very nice read, so creative

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Jom Lollen 05 October 2011

dats really sad...: (

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Spiro Ujewe-zaz 18 August 2017

I guess I am the one in that poem. The persona

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Nida Aslam 19 December 2013

sad for the poor me Who believed something nvr to be

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Ck Khalid 16 January 2013

nice poem..really enchanted thanks a lot khalid jathiyeri

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Brenda Schneidt 11 April 2012

wow i really loved it and keep up the good work. it is really sad to almost made me cry

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Cassandra Hernandez 09 April 2012

wow thts really good i like it :)

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