Rosy Flower Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Rosy Flower



She is Miss Rosy Flower
Really beautiful and happier
I find her in good mood
She is the only one in neighborhood

Her walk is with elegance
It is really a chance
To watch her move
For theories to disprove

I shall not narrate
Or relate
Her physical appearance
But real human at once

I find her kind
With benevolent approach in mind
She takes care of destitute and poor
Visiting door to door

She has been blessed with plenty
That is gift from almighty
She has chose he path of charity
To the welfare and service of humanity

I term her as goddess
Always bearing smile on face
As if conveying the message
You shall face the fate in old age

Prepare for next birth
But nicely live and breathe
This life is god gift
Never to be wasted with hate or rift

* Rosy Flower is imagery character *

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Great use of description Jair Massiah2 minutes ago Lovely words used to describe this character Rosy. Is she human, goddess or flower? The poet paints it wonderfully and leaves it up to the interpretation of the reader. There are a few grammatical errors, but that is easily fixed! ;)

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Nice Matt Griffin3 minutes ago I like the use of charity and kindness is world so despair Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2019

Rosie Caristea Thank you! 馃檹 I鈥檓 overwhelmed with your effort and kindness. 1 Hide or report this Like 路 Reply 路 1d

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2019

Matloob Bokhari Beautiful 1 Hide or report this Like 路 Reply 路 10h Alan LiewActive Now Alan Liew Great poem 1 Hide or report this Like 路 Reply 路 3h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2019

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2019

Rosie Caristea Sania Zakir So flattering馃槉 2 Hide or report this Like 路 Reply 路 11h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2019

Sania Zakir What a lovely poem on Ms. Rosie. So beautifully penned Dear Sir Hasmukh Mehta jee. Loved reading it. 馃槉 2 Hide or report this Like 路 Reply 路 11h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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