River Poem by S.D. TIWARI

River

Rating: 3.0


River

Flow is my life
frozen I die
stop only if dry

I have two banks
but no dollar or francs
More important than dollar
for you and me is water.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeremiah Walton 10 October 2011

'for you and me' feels awkward when I read it out loud. I enjoyed the opening 3 lines simplicity quite a bit. They mean a lot and open up the poem nicely

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