Thanks to all who took the time to read and comment on my poem. This is the first time I've had my work featured as a member poem. Who knows if it will happen again. Again, thanks for your gracious comments.
Keen observations noted and created in poem, Most deserving this choice by Poem Hunter and Team, I have enjoyed every line in this marvelous poem.
CONGRATULATIONS as The Member Poem Of The Day.5 Stars full vote.
The scenes and observations very well captured, since I know London too.
But poet Thomas Sir. likes bit eerie things as a true citizen of London, the poet's conclusion in the last line of the last stanza. Wonderful!
‘Tis a place a predator can come to prey
To exalt in bawdy hymnals with a drink.
Espying whores for a sacrificial blade.
At The Ten Bells there are plenty to slay.....great write about the terrorizing mind thru the thick darkness of night beside the holiness of mind; your descriptive words are very thrilling to read; congrats for being selected as POD...5****
Well done and congratulation's to you Thomas.
Your poem most deserving of Member Poem of the Day.
And this is the first time a more than finely written/imagined darkness poem to any recollection has earned that accolade.
For that, again the highest salutations and kudos to you Thomas.
You are the best writer of horror/darkness on this site, thank you and take care.
Thomas another mesmerizing great write that makes the reader feel transported back to Whitechapel for your poetry reels in every viewer and takes them on a dark journey.
A superb write! And poor Mary Kelly was the Ripper's last victim and with such a terrible demise.
Thanks Thomas for writing and sharing this dark and most descriptive poem.
Take care and five diabolical bible-black stars.