Pain Poem by bryan crow

Pain

Rating: 5.0


pain can hurt some times in life
so should i take my life or should i keep it
if i live a other day then i have deal with pain
pain by go home to get beat by my father
pain by not being love
pain by going to school to get bully
pain by going to school to get call a loser
pain by getting stab
pain by not having a friend to be there for me
so should i kill my self
i can go outside and hang my self
i can shoot my self
i can drowned my self
i can jump off a house
but this it is only a temporary solution


pain by bryan crow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ryuu Age 07 February 2009

amanda is right..giving up is not the solution..have some faith and get yourself out of that pain..i have never felt such a pain but i have felt something that cause myself to give up on life..but i got over it and now sun shine everyday in my life..i'm a happier person nowdays..

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Amanda Seltrecht 29 January 2009

We are all left with some pain in one way or another, and it's hard to get through the pain, but if you have faith then things will eventually turn out ok. So please don't give up, your life is worth living.

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