My All Poem by Tim Rawson
My All
I'd give you everything I have
My heart, my soul, my mind
To always have you in my life
And walk with you through time
My love for you goes on and on
I see no end in sight
You're more than just a name to me
Through your eyes my path has light
The way I feel when we are close
Is hard for me to explain
But this I know in my heart
I wanna feel your pain
I wanna know you're every move
And feel your heartbeat
To always have you close to me
Would make my life complete
You do to me like no one has
Your beauty I see it shine
The way you walk, the way you talk
I want to make you mine
Please read these words that I have wrote
And think about what I've said
And keep them safe in your mind
Your heart, your soul and your head
Yea, she caught Shame and shamed him with her kiss, With her fair kiss, and lips much lovelier Than lips of amorous roses in late spring.
Bold expression of a genuine, plain, simple, candid and humble love! Nice rhythm and diction. Could have been far better with some paraphrases. Yet I like it.
An expression of inner feeling. Hope there's equal response. Nice job!
Words like birds taking bath on brook, , nice singing and flowing..thank you
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4/19/2024 4:11:02 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Can't believe this has no comment or vote, it has now! Lovely read, Lorraine