Love Is Replaced Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Love Is Replaced

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Not that physical love
We believe
Is so important
Than its form a present

Initially we may be running after
Looking from angle particular
Her body and face complexion
Intelligence and color combination

Life is long way to go ahead
We need cautious approach to lead
It may offer stiff resistance
Yet it is a golden chance

What do we think really?
Collect something and add daily
This shall secure tomorrow
There shall be enough of scope to grow

Love and infatuation disappear
They take back seat and remain in rear
Other responsibilities raise head
Person feels burdened as if dead

Love is replaced by responsibility
Affection has been taken over by inability
You are forced to retaliate in stubborn manner
You are struggling for time that is considered better

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 November 2014

This is about a person's love for a another is fading away. Tiya Booker14 hours ago I like the rhythm and rhymes to the poem. It's on a topic that I haven't really thought of. Kind of sad though.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2014

Great Cheesy RhymesLess than a minute ago Wow I liked this verse very much...has good flow and the meaning is great! Very nice Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2014

I love it Cocoa Shawnee1 minute ago The concept and word usage is great.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2014

Alpa Suba likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2014

Not that physical love We believe

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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