Limerick.21. An Advice Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.21. An Advice



Now that you are old and spent
Look in the mirror, I recommend
Before stepping out
Lest somebody may shout
Sir, please! Your pant's buttons, attend!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dinesan Madathil 23 September 2014

An advice to men alone! Why are the old eves spared?

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Akhtar Jawad 23 September 2014

This too happened with me, but it was the zip and again my wife pointed out it.Another interesting write. But how you come to know my secrets?

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Lyn Paul 23 September 2014

OMG Valsa, I haven't seen this for a while.... Is it okay to tell them to zip it, Or do we look bad that we have noticed. Thank You for making us Smile.

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Mantu Mahakul 23 September 2014

Beautifully penned the poem of awareness. Nice one.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 September 2014

The blues of old age and this is the truth we see of age around......Valsa.....very funny indeed.....very creative

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 December 2018

Beautifully painted this Limeric with fun and humor. Nice presentation.

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Loke Kok Yee 05 November 2015

I did and I got quite a fright thanks Valsa-10

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 October 2014

Quiet funny Limerick Valsa. Beautifully presented.....

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Piyush Dey 05 October 2014

nice write, a funny read. loved to read something funny after such sorrowful reads.

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Rajkamal P.j 30 September 2014

A good write. Congrats.

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