Light Will Change The Code Poem by Michael Hopkins

Light Will Change The Code

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Illness everywhere

Humans crying in the dark

Light will change the code

© 2017 M. N. Hopkins

Light Will Change The Code
Sunday, July 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: change,healing,inspirational,light,motivational,transformation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note: The inspiration first came to me for the writing of this poem a few days ago. The three words that popped into my mind were, "change the code". I have played with several different combinations of words to express being active rather than reaction in setting the tone for ones mental and emotional life rather than going along with outside forces or influences.

I decided to use the haiku (5-7-5) form as the medium to convey this message. I first published this poem on my blog today,16 July 2017.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2017

Though penning is short theme is great. Light will change the code has vast and immense meaning that some hints come from your poet's note. Beautiful haiku shared really...10.

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Michael Hopkins 13 October 2017

Thanks KM

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 July 2017

Crying in the dark! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Michael Hopkins 13 October 2017

Thanks for the feedback Ed.

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Rob Lamberton 01 February 2024

Let there be Light…!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 10 February 2023

The what, why, and how of your thought-out phrase. Nice work Michael

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Rob Lamberton 09 February 2023

You are right, we need changed to our very core. Such a poem of hope! !

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Anjandev Roy 18 March 2020

Wonderful short write. anjandev roy.

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Dominic Windram 16 October 2019

Very nice Haiku Michael! I also like the illustration that accompanies it...a ten from me!

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Michael Hopkins 17 October 2019

Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems, Dominic.

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