Indira Renganathan

Life Has Its Pitfalls

Life has its meanders and
Pitfalls

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (11/1/2020 4:27:00 AM)

    Who can tell moon that
    Sun is just a fire ball
    With no heart /// wise expression

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna MenonGeeta Radhakrishna Menon (10/27/2020 9:08:00 AM)

    Who can tell moon that
    Sun is just a fire ball
    With no heart
    A profound thought that needs real pondering! Life with its pitfalls, sometimes, has no answer.....A great poem Indira Ma'm of life's strange philosophy.......5 Stars

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (10/25/2020 3:45:00 AM)

    Your this brilliant poem makes us very emotional. Sun burns but moon reflects calmness. Heart beats to express love and care. Life is precious. Love cannot be hidden at all. This poem is very nicely and interestingly penned...5 stars..

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (10/22/2020 11:22:00 AM)

    Who can tell moon that
    Sun is just a fire ball
    With no heart....outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem on love and nature on a metaphorical base is amazingly delineated. Thank you dear madam for your brilliant imagery. Five stars.

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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (10/18/2020 1:07:00 AM)

    A very meaningful write. Thanks for sharing.

    'Who can tell moon that
    Sun is just a fire ball
    With no heart, '...is very nice. Loved it.

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  • Varsha MVarsha M (10/18/2020 12:52:00 AM)

    Magnificent metophrical play rolling between sun and moon though different live in one space. This is life dispute all pitfalls overcomes and makes a way to live to the fullest. Really enjoyed ma'am. Thank-you so much.

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