Life Has Its Pitfalls Poem by Indira Renganathan

Life Has Its Pitfalls

Rating: 5.0


Life has its meanders and
Pitfalls

How could my love hide
All these before

Having fallen into those
Pitfalls
Now I trust and prefer
Wedlock that warns me of
Those pitfalls

Thanks to wedlock
As I'm a lotus now
Out of life's mire

Yet

You set out to
Earn money
Drowned in money power
You are there and there
I am here and here

Love has lost its crown

Moon's asking its sun
'How long, for how long
Poles apart should we be
Like this? '

Sun's doubting
'I'm giving her
Enough light..
What else she wants? '

Who can tell moon that
Sun is just a fire ball
With no heart

Sunday, October 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 18 October 2020

Magnificent metophrical play rolling between sun and moon though different live in one space. This is life dispute all pitfalls overcomes and makes a way to live to the fullest. Really enjoyed ma'am. Thank-you so much.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 November 2020

Who can tell moon that Sun is just a fire ball With no heart /// wise expression

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 October 2020

Who can tell moon that Sun is just a fire ball With no heart A profound thought that needs real pondering! Life with its pitfalls, sometimes, has no answer.....A great poem Indira Ma'm of life's strange philosophy.......5 Stars

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2020

Your this brilliant poem makes us very emotional. Sun burns but moon reflects calmness. Heart beats to express love and care. Life is precious. Love cannot be hidden at all. This poem is very nicely and interestingly penned...5 stars..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 October 2020

Who can tell moon that Sun is just a fire ball With no heart....outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem on love and nature on a metaphorical base is amazingly delineated. Thank you dear madam for your brilliant imagery. Five stars.

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 October 2020

A very meaningful write. Thanks for sharing. 'Who can tell moon that Sun is just a fire ball With no heart, '...is very nice. Loved it.

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