Knock Knock! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Knock Knock!

Rating: 5.0


Let me in
Let me stay
Let me sway
To the tune of love
A little space
Is what I need
In your heart
To live in peace.

© Aarzoo Mehek

Knock Knock!
Tuesday, September 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 28 September 2016

Who's that! ! ! ! .... Such a wonderful poem, short, sweet and adorable.......100+++

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Souren Mondal 30 September 2016

Sometimes all we need is a little space in another person's life. To love and be loved. Thank you for sharing Arzoo. It's a beautiful poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 September 2016

Love! You will always be accepted in; with the muse of the truth and, righteous morals. Nice piece of work.

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Nosheen Irfan 28 September 2016

OMG. it's so beautiful, it has taken my breath away. Something i wanted to say but couldn't. You have made it look so easy to say the deepest thing. It's so good to see you back with a sterling write. A succinct gem that speaks loudly for me.10plus

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 June 2022

I admire your quest for a little space somewhere in someone's heart. So lovely experience. Appreciated this endearing little poem! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 January 2022

Let me sway to the tune of love....soft and sweet expression. An endearing little poem...5 stars.

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Rajnish Manga 19 July 2020

Sweet and tiny poem of love which can survive without placing any demands. Thank you so much.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 04 October 2016

You got it. Reservation confirmed. Marvelous image. (10)

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 September 2016

Hi Aarzoo, It is everybody's desire to be recognised, loved and cared for by those on him one has bestowed the same feelings. The feelings expressed best in so few words, so simple words. beautiful poem, coming from the heart.10

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