I'm Trying To Make A Rhyme - Δεν Μπορώ Να Φτιάξω Ρίμα Poem by Kostas Lagos

I'm Trying To Make A Rhyme - Δεν Μπορώ Να Φτιάξω Ρίμα

Rating: 5.0


On the street perfoms a mime

I'm trying to make a rhyme

I don't know how to dance

I 'm awful at romance

Why do I fail every time?



Κάποιος παίζει παντομίμα

Δεν μπορώ να φτιάξω ρίμα

Στο χορό είμαι στούρνος

Και στην αγάπη μπούφος

Πάντα χάνω κι είναι κρίμα

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 January 2021

The rhyme throughout in this poem makes this poem fascinating and entertaining.A well crafted write

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 January 2021

A wonderful write! Thanks for sharing! !

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Rini Shibu 14 January 2021

Well penned Lagos.. you won this time

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David Wood 16 January 2021

It could be worse, my wife said I only had one fault - breathing! !

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 15 January 2021

What the poet felt very nicely penned.

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M.J. Lemon 14 January 2021

This verse is...success! A terrific poem, Kostas.

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Varsha M 14 January 2021

Your finally rhymed and you failed all the time because you tried every time and step by step fathomed many also only this one you missed a step just to rectify in next move and master this also and move on.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 January 2021

You have succeeded in making a fun rhyme.5 stars.

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