I Will Take You To The Lovers Land Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I Will Take You To The Lovers Land

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You come to me leaving all your worries behind
And I will take you to the land of love called Lovers land
Where time will stand-still to follow our instructions
Where the stars will see the twinkling in our eyes
And the moon will learn waning and waxing
Where clouds will be longing to become our pillow
Cuckoo and Nightingale will learn to sing our songs
But we shall remain engaged with each other.

Tuesday, January 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 January 2019

A wonderful poem of love. Very imaginative and with superb imagery. It captures a kind of love that is so pure and magical. Well crafted and executed.

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2019

Thank u so much Ms Rose.

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S H 15 January 2019

A call by lover to come meet leaving the worries of this world behind means they want to take a dip in the sea of love and let people talk about them, let other creatures learn by watching them, they will remain engrossed in each other. So is the love, fearless and free from worries. Nice poem.

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2019

Thank u so much it means a lot coming from a critic.

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Anjandev Roy 04 June 2021

Delightful piece.....really beautiful....thank u.

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Darren Jkoeryo 20 January 2021

DJ is ever ready to go...

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Gordon Walter 17 January 2019

I m ready to come, a wonderful poem Asim.

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Mihaela Pirjol 16 January 2019

This is really a romantic and an imaginative write! It is soft and tender: filled with ethereal beauty! I love your love poems!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 January 2019

Let us two only swim lying upon each other n a seea of love where we alone will exeplify our imagery OF WHAT IS LOVE YEPS POET SAYS TIS MARVELOUS WISH I COULD ALSO VIEW AND LEARNswimming in the sea of love where high remains the surf for ever of loving folding cajoling loving LOVE

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2019

Thanks much, I pray that ur wish come true..

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