I Was Not Taken Poem by Will Barber

I Was Not Taken

Rating: 5.0


I was not taken by the claws of love,
Nor bound upon a bloody rock;
I heard no angels, saw no dove,
No eagle, nothing in that dark.

I called out in the night for truth,
As if the truth would come to me,
As if the universe had any
Truths left to say.

Go bid the winds to cease to blow,
Go bid the satellites to fall;
I cannot do another day
Of labour for the world.

1985

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Don Mcwilliams 26 March 2008

A very fine write, Will. Don

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Lynda Robson 26 March 2008

A very powerful piece Will, thanks for sharing it,10 Lynda x

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Linda Ori 26 March 2008

Makes you wonder if anything we do is ever recognized by the 'powers that be'. We muddle through our foggy lives with bits of sunshine here and there, and the only truths are what we conclude on our own. This is a wonderful piece, Will. Linda :)

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Will, you took the words right out of my mouth... but naturally composed them infinitely more eloquently. t x

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Duncan Wyllie 29 March 2008

Dear Will Ever since we be-friended each other on this site, I must say that I have come to respect and admire you, firstly as a person and secondly as a poet, How can this be? well! I see you through your words as a man of integrity and brillance! ! ! I could only hope to be half the man you have come to be Love and full respect, , , duncan

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Tailor Bell 15 July 2009

how true this seems for me...wonderful work, Will. your eloquence is astoundingly memorable. -Tailor

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 August 2008

sometimes in life, we got to do things that we hate to do, but that's life.if only we been given certain options to avoid them, the world gonna be the best place to live ever.poor thing that's not the picture that we want, so we got to do what we got to do.great write Will.

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Faith Brigham 27 April 2008

A 10 from me as well, Will! This is wonderful! Very strong writing and excellent flow. I loved this oen!

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Brian Dorn 07 April 2008

Wouldn't it be nice if life was fair for everyone. I suppose most of us would be better off, but I think that poetry would surely suffer. We'd probably miss out on great stuff like yours, Will. Excellent write!

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Marvin Brato 03 April 2008

Sir Will Many dare but only few really become authentic poets as you are! Your way of striking the right note of a thought is admirably brilliant sir. Marvin(a fan)

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