I Do Breathe Silently Poem by me poet yeps poet

I Do Breathe Silently

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The doc says
take long and deep breaths
so I breathe softly silently
hold it
then release
the doc takes his fees
he fleas

do breathe daily
till you need to live
after that 'twill
be heavenly will

depends on vacancy
of an invisible bed
out there
somewhere

till then keep
holding your breath
we will still keep vigil
but don't dribble

Thursday, January 14, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: death,safety,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
life needs pure air can you afford it is big Qs
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M.J. Lemon 14 January 2021

There must be there just has to be, a heavenly vacancy....somewhere, some place. This is one of your finest, Poet!

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Varsha M 14 January 2021

Every one will die someday.....so before you or me die let's contribute to this world something that's our our quality and their necessity.

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Varsha M 14 January 2021

Air is a mixture of many gases of which oxygen is 21% so there is no pure air. If you want exclusively oxygen you can by oxygen cylinders they have 100% oxygen...be positive man. De

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