Heart Seed Of Love Poem by Thomas Kane

Heart Seed Of Love

Rating: 4.5


Bare is the ground
One left to lonely ways
Day dawns and passes away
The same sorrow song
Dreams so close leaves one to wishes

Search for a soul and I found!
One left to their lonely ways
May it be wrong to excite in one's dismay
Perhaps but it won't last long
Dreams of a day with long shared kisses

Love be gathered as the seed
So here I sow with all my heart
Words rehearsed and once more played out
As my mouth opens the mind draws blank
I panic trip and stumble for a word

Audible noises is all that can be heard
Beet red as the blood rushes to my face
The sting felt like a slap or sunburn
As we bask in the unforgiving silence
There we both stand in the wake of its aftermath

Seconds run long stretched to the limit
Onlookers pointing, staring in horror
The train wreck crop, what have I planted?
Derailed the encroaching doom looms overhead
Then a sudden burst! an explosion!

Laughter wails out like a fog horn bellows
Shocked with relief a smile cracks
Calming sensations extinguish the fear
As I notice beauty radiating from you my dear
Purest the souls delight with you in my sight

The seed sown of heart yeild love everlasting
Tears of laughter water away to this day
I met the most wonderful soul
Let it be many years of joy we share as we grow old
As pleasing to the eyes and tender on the heart

Never will this feeling fade

Sunday, November 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,relationships,story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Kane 18 November 2018

I feel like this one is ok, but i'm not an experienced writer by any means.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 November 2018

A beautiful poem on love that holds us spellbound. The power of love has been vividly conveyed and depicted in this marvelous write.

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Tommy Wigington 18 November 2018

Thank you so much! :)

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Mihaela Pirjol 28 November 2018

To have been fortunate to fall in love: it suffice! After that..nothing really matters...

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 February 2019

An exceptional poem of the day. Congrats, Tommy for being chosen..10+++

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Prabir Gayen 28 March 2019

Beautiful poem.... well penned... Thanks........////

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Wahab Abdul 23 February 2019

Good poem indeed, i love it.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 February 2019

A beautifully crafted meaningful poem with wonderful flight of imagery and conceptualization. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Thomas Kane 08 February 2019

I would like to thank everyone for there kind comments and to PoemHunter for giving it exposure, it surprised me and brought much joy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 February 2019

Search for a soul! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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