He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not (My Own Version) Poem by Verliza Gajeles

He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not (My Own Version)

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He loves me, he loves me not
Broke up or tie the knot
Just tell me I'll be alright
Does he loves me, or loves me not?

On the count of three, I wanna see
Dear calla lily, please tell me
Just wanna know what's in his heart
Does he loves me, or loves me not?

If the last petal will say he loves me not
It doesn't matter, I'll be alright
Though I know I would be hurt
Does he loves me, or loves me not?

I hope he'll know I love him so
Through these petals, he'll know it's true
All I want is to win his heart
Does he loves me, or loves me not?


(July 14,2015)

Friday, July 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allotey Abossey 03 August 2015

Wow, this is a very sweet and beautiful poem. I love the style. It's so sweet to read. Good work my friend. Good work

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Hannington Mumo 31 July 2015

Well-written. I like it!

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Verliza Gajeles 31 July 2015

Thank you Hannington :) God bless always.

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Verliza Gajeles

Verliza Gajeles

Dumaguete City, Philippines
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