You've gifted me
a flinty world
of ‘bland' emptiness,
yet
your hidden blessings
have powered me
to feel-
there is in that
something more real
than the everyday's
illusory truths
of cheer and wretchedness.
Hi Chandan. This poem makes me cry as I think of my mom who was gone just the other month. There's a story in your poems that everybody can relate to, illusory yet as realistic as grief as this poem is. Thank you for the recall, though painful.
Love this poem for its poetic power. Nice weekend from Perdita.
Thanks Perdita for your inspiring comment. Stay blessed always. Chandan
You've gifted me a flinty world of ‘bland' emptiness…captivating poetic expression! A sweet poem! Loved reading it…10
Dear poet, thank you very much for your precise as well as inspiring comment. Chandan
A highly imaginative poem touching to spirituality has been nicely and touchingly presented. Thank you dear Chandan for posting this gem.10
I feel inspired by your style of writing. I like the rhyme of profundity and spiritual reality of the piece. A beautiful rhetorical poem. Thanks for sharing Chandan.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yet your hidden blessings have powered me... from the wretched to goodness and light and power...... again the same theme in different words and imagination........ thank u dear poet. i am happy after reading your poem. tony