Glide Of Time Poem by Chandan Dey

Glide Of Time

Rating: 5.0


Leaving me alone
when you fled in that night
without dropping your beret,
i read the untold stories
on your face

Caged
when you came back next day
the sun had crossed
its halfway mark.

Glide Of Time
Tuesday, May 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copyright © Chandan Dey, May 1,2018
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 07 May 2018

I read the untold stories! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chandan Dey 07 June 2018

Thanks for your comment. Chandan

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Perdita Young 09 May 2018

So Time is relative? So often it has tricked us in different moods and emotions. The poem and the picture conveys more than what we see.

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Chandan Dey 07 June 2018

Thank you Perdita for your beautiful comment. Chandan

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Doris Cornago 20 November 2018

Hi Chandan. I like the quality of waiting in your poems. It's like an open-ended story which grows in the telling. I think that's the true nature of poems - to grow with the telling and the interpreting. Poems are as much a part of our lives as stories, and poets can be as distinctive as some storytellers would be. Don't you also think so?

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John Tiong Chunghoo 29 September 2018

Love this. Thanks for coming over to leave your great comments.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 August 2018

Leaving me alone when you fled in that night without dropping your beret, i read the untold stories on your face.......scintillating poetic expression! I am delighted to read it time and again my friend!

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Chandan Dey 20 August 2018

Your comments on my poems always inspire me and this one isn't different from that, my friend. Chandan

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 02 July 2018

A nicely written prose some nice creativity..I like it

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Bri Edwards 12 June 2018

i like the poem, but i don't totally understand what you are saying. the illustration is, i believe, part of a painting i saw displayed about 50 years ago at a New York City Museum. i like it. i understand the relationship of the title to the painting more so than to your poem. let me read another. i DID read your bio as well; thanks for having one on PH. AND welcome to PH! bri :)

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