Fragility Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Fragility

Rating: 5.0


All your constituents are fragile,
Even your tears and the smile,
You dress your hairs as a work of art,
In the cage of fuzz you dream a heart,
With pleasant soft fingers a comb in love,
Wish in the nest will remain the dove,
And sing for you in all the seasons,
When the tide is over go back sea-sons,
The pearl your power, your wining trump card,
Didn't play cleverly you weren't a wizard,
For the daughter of earth frustrations and fears,
A broken heart and wet eyes in tears,
Like your whole your tears are fragile,
You stood up with a new smile,
Life is full of diamonds and pearls,
Redressed your hairs with lovely new curls,
Son of the sea came back with a tide,
And proposed you to become his bride,
You turned down with a bitter smile,
I was wrong you are not fragile!

Saturday, January 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fragility
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalid Saifullah 31 January 2015

A beautiful message, in a beautiful poem, for a woman who is mistaken as fragile.................10

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Salini Nair 03 February 2015

Son of the sea came back with a tide, And proposed you to become his bride, You turned down with a bitter smile, I was wrong you are not fragile! ..............lovely write....great

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Bisma Mirza 02 February 2015

What a Spectacular poem..... Brilliant! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10 on 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 February 2015

All constituents including smile and hope all things are fragile. Wonderful composition really. Nicely drafted.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 February 2015

A Beautiful poem. I agree with Valsa's comment. If given love and acceptance, she can prove herself, that she is not fragile. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading each lines.

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Valsa George 31 January 2015

Shakespeare's famous utterance 'Frailty thy name is woman' is often quoted in place and out of place'. Women are often taken to be frail and fragile! But indomitable strength lies in most of the women! If given love and acceptance, she can amaze the world sometimes! Thanks for this acknowledgement Akhtarji! 12

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