Font Color='Purple'Tonight, When I'M With You/Font Poem by Geovanni Leaño

Font Color='Purple'Tonight, When I'M With You/Font

Rating: 5.0



..........................................................Tonigh...........tWhenIm..............To:
......BY: ........................................WithYou, All.....IsCalm, AllIsB..............BLUE
.........Lex_Potent...................eautiful, AllRefle..ctsTheBeautyIns
..............................................ideOfYou, ...And......My...SoulIsEver
............................................SoThankful, ToG.......etAChanceToSee
...........................................Such............Beaut..yLikeY...........ou, To
...........................................night..............................................When
.......................I'....................mWi...........ME.........................thYou....................,
..................A...llIs.......B..........lesse..............&....................d, AllIs....D.......ivin....e,
.................All..Rese.....mbl.........esMy................YOU......Love.....For....You, ..And
................IWo..nderW...hoCo.......uldBe.......................More.....For...tunate..ToLive
...............AL..ife..Li....ke...Mine, ......ToBe...............WithS....omeo..neA..sS..peci..alA
..............sYo..u, T..on...ight..WhenI'....mWit............hYou, A..llIsFai...r, Th..eS...eren..eSky
....IsVer..yN..ice, ..Al..lRes..emblesThatSou..........lDeepI..nsideY..ou, ..And..This..TimeItWill
.........Neve..rB..eH..ardFor....MeToRealize, ............TheLoveIFeelT..oSo..meo..ne..AsBeaut
............ifulA..sYou, ..Tonigh..WhenI'mWit...................hYou, AllIsTen...der, ..Like..ASimple
...............Starfall, AllWillBeNeededToM.......................akeAResemblanceOfYou, AndThe
WayIHearBothOfOurSouls, TheyWeildTheSweetestMelodyManCouldEverHearInTheirLifetime.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Hi Geovanni, I love this poem at first it was extremly confussing but when i read it a secend time it was less so and i understood it. I gave it a TEN! ! I can see the heart with a face. I know that it is about love. Nat.

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Sophia Smith 24 April 2008

AWESOME! ! ! I totally loved it. I think it was very romanic. The swans were a good idea, I thought that it was vry cute. Great Job. I would give it 11 but we can not go that high so sorry. Sophia

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Dr.subhendu Kar 24 April 2008

Oh what a beauty by the twin swans love when respires inbetween by the colors mihght be flinting from the rainbow by the moon night when imbecile when besotted by the blue................unique curvature of love by the art out of words, love seems to fledges by the twins, really unique art, the poetry and art when entwined,10+, thanks for sharing

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Donall Dempsey 25 April 2008

wow! That's something else...I really loved it...pretty spectacular and pretty and spectacular(oh I'm repeating myself) ...the swans of love forming the heart of the matter...so damned clever. cool...real cool...my eye is still tripping out on it and it has burnt onto my eye like an after-image. love Donall Donall

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Weezze ... 25 April 2008

That is really sweet and very well set out. It must have taken plenty of time to write it and set it out but I think it was worth it.

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Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

You have taken poetry form to a whole knew concept. Well done. Brilliant and creative.

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Emperor 8 21 August 2008

Hey! very nice poem, i like the drawing but found it kinda hard to read at times but must say it was worth it, al in all really good

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Leigh A. Hill 20 August 2008

wow! beautiful! ! and very original

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Triin Kann 19 August 2008

Amazing piece of art... I can't say just poetry :) Very beautiful, and colorful. Both in word and in image. A 10 from me!

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Jocey Ogdens 19 August 2008

This poem is beautiful. There's so much feeling expressed in the words, and creativity put into detail. Beautiful.

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