Feel Like A Simile Sometimes Poem by Lonnie Hicks

Feel Like A Simile Sometimes

Rating: 2.7


I feel like a train sometimes
that can't get no locomotin.'

My wheels lumber
and my Ideals get stuck
in sideways roller motions.

I feel like the moon sometimes
beautiful but dead.

Feel like thinking sometimes
but get tangled up in emotions.

Feel like a bird sometimes
remembering how to soar.

Feel like sleeping sometimes
and not getting up,
being in bed for a while.

Feel like Christmas when
someone gives me a smile.

Feel like feeling more
on certain days and times.

Feel like talking deep
and thinking light
laughing loud
and quiet.

Feel like feeling like
my best days
sometimes.

Feel like is feeling like
if a good poem rhymes
sometimes.

Feel like is feeling like
if the rhythm beats in time,
if my heart skips to music quips
and rejoins at the metered line.

Feel like
is feeling like
feeling is ok;
but feeling good or bad
without that like
is better;
well..
like superior.
Like ok?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cole gordon 17 January 2019

This sucks because you are the worst

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Lauren Rosina 15 March 2015

Feel like thinking sometimes but get tangled up in emotions. I relate to that line most. I just wrote a poem and that was the thought that I couldn't articulate that started it off.

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Feelings freely flowing.Excellently expressed.

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