Echoes Of A Mirage Poem by Robert Rittel

Echoes Of A Mirage

Rating: 5.0


Little splashing waves at the warm sea scented beach,
reflected moonlight large and low to seeming reach.
We were young, in love and trusted that destiny,
hearts so full of dreams and ideal ecstasy.
Acknowledged decisions within that star dusted frame,
embraced holdings that souls recognized as same.
Gentle winds as cloak of prophecies,
celestial glistening statements has no fallacies.
The instinct within that reach of loves purpose,
conceived fires in articulated hearts as furnace.
Deep in the soul searched visible silence,
twofold visions in one dream sphere reliance.
Little did we knew then in that close hour,
those pastures with silver edges are ours to devour.
From some fixed place of heaven waiting for years,
time like a pulse set the tone in that spheres.
Memories that still stand after all like a shrine,
rainbow bridges to cross at times are the sign.
Remember me beyond the silent land,
when you are not holding me by the hand.
Coming back to this place of warm quenching sand,
and shared vestige thoughts where our command.
O memories from anchored love of finished years,
nights of light satin and echoes of salty tears.

Echoes Of A Mirage
Friday, October 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2021

A marvelous poem with great philosophic depth with romantic vibes. More importantly, this poem is lyrically blended with great rhythms and rhymes. Top score!

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Soran M. H 09 October 2020

It is a kind of philosophy and knowledge at the same time, here we feel the poet’s deep experience in the realm of writing and life.. really it is Echoes Of A Mirage

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Soran M. H 09 October 2020

Strong and beautiful spiritual poetry that reveals something of the hidden aspect of life. Its poetic images are renewed and attractive, its language is poetic and coherent, the theme is very important and the choice of successful words comes in their place, deserves 5 stars, this is what we are looking for in poetry

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Deluke Muwanigwa 09 October 2020

Good poem neighbour. The rhyming is superb. Great stuff.

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