Damselfly Poem by Jacqui Thewless

Damselfly

Rating: 2.8


damselfly resting
on a pinpoint in the air
changes direction

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neil Mac Neil 23 September 2009

Beautifully captured moment. the 'pin-point of air' is a very finely poised pivot in the traditional 5-7-5 rhythms.

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nomad omnia 09 September 2009

Ah! This one is perfect! Thanks for the image, Jacqui. N

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