Beterayal Poem by Indira Renganathan

Beterayal

Rating: 5.0


His passion is
Paddy cultivation
To the possible
Utmost extent

He does and reaps
A rich harvest

Always his hope is
The high sun
That he would be
Life long favoured

But
Sun should not breathe
Too closer to earth
He'll take away
Earth's breath giving
Drought instead of rains

So does his son
With a charisma
A bright smile
Giving a high hope

But
breaking his promise
Swindling the harvest
Betraying

Thursday, October 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 23 March 2023

Simply wonderful.....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 March 2023

He does and reaps a rich harvest.....I liked this precious bit of expression so much dear madam. Top score and to my favourites!

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2020

Awesome, what a comparison between the sun of the sky and the son of the eye, both benefit when they obey and follow the right path. Clever writing Indiraji. Loved it 100****

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2020

So does his son With a charisma A bright smile Giving a high hope But breaking his promise Swindling the harvest Betraying.....most touching. Beautifully penned on betrayal. Thanks for sharing. Five stars.

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