Before Sleeping Poem by Chaminda Pushpadewa

Before Sleeping

Rating: 3.8


Sun drowned in the sea at the eve
Shadow of the darkness came to all space
Street light towers bulbs were sparkle
Sparkling was car, buses, bike headlight as a flame

Passengers were decreased from coach and get off
Proud statues has been wetter without a roof
Policemen were hidden among dark for catch up thief
Plotting a ship it has been covered there there sky half

Quitting was all shop keepers without number of street dog
Queens like female dummies in the show case were smiling
Question lost people came to the restaurant forgathering
Quality liquor bottle ordered by them and drinking

Restaurant is quit place but also some body was sigh
Rose chicken and cashew nuts taste was very high
Romantic lovers face delight by there hearth
Road became empty that saw among there front door wrath

Saturday, October 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: evening,nightfall
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 10 October 2020

Many things are happening before sleep. Lovely poem

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 October 2020

A well crafted poem of the day. Truly magnificent. Congrats on your featured piece...5 stars*****

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2020

Wrath! ! Empty road! ! Muse of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 October 2020

Congratulations for this chosen poem by Poem Hunter and Team. This is called The Member Poem Of The Day. Many activities before sleeping so well portrayed. A fine poem to read.5 Stars. God's Blessings for you.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 14 October 2020

Hmmm....nice poem. New rhyming idea back and front. Somebody is there a technical term for this kind of poem. Wanna try it some time

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Zina 09 November 2021

not bad but bad

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Zina 09 November 2021

This poem is not the poem bikonu

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 October 2020

Romantic lovers face delight by there hearth Road became empty that saw among there front door wrath.....beautifully described the activeness about the surrounding after the nightfall, evening; after over the working hours everyone to own way, night comes to its depth and happening around many types of events which acutely described in this poem; congrats for being this beautiful poem as POD…..from me 5*****

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Hans Vr 14 October 2020

Good reminiscence about the night. Well done!

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Lyn Paul 14 October 2020

Wonderful to read your evening events. It is interesting to get an insight into others lives and cultures. Thank you

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