Alone On A Beach Poem by hazem al jaber

Alone On A Beach

Rating: 2.6


oh, , sadness...
your circle killing me..
and your memories waves flooded me..
my life is a sky without lights..
where is your yelling o happiness..? ? ?
and in which wilderness, can i found you..? ? ?
i am a star without sense...
i am a candy without taste..
and here alone in that beach....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cora Fazio 02 January 2006

Hazem this is a beautiful poem it shows the emptiness of a heartbroken soul. Very Touching. Poetry that pulls the reader in is excellent poetry to me. cora

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Nibedita Deb 13 December 2005

I understand the passion in this poem. Just a reference - I may suggest to read my poem 'Happiness'. Perhaps the next poems could stop bleeding...very touchy one for me is this poem. Good work.

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