Agreeable Behavior Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Agreeable Behavior

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I adore You immensely
With great devotion
I ask You why You exhibit
A piercing look.

We strongly believe always
That You have abundant patience
I wonder what might have occurred
In Your relentless effort to rule this universe.

I'm perturbed to not find Your coolness
Showing a combination of peace and grace
Something somewhere sure happened
I implore You to provide the reason.

Maybe some offence took place on our part
Maybe we didn't behave as expected
We'll find our fault with deep search
We'll then act in a manner agreeable to You.

Wednesday, July 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: devotion,prayer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michaelw1two 08 July 2020

Aloha and Cheers Tirupathi! Aah the abstractcreating seemingly of an individual yet leading forward in efforts to present a personal connection to the possibility a one divine entity... catching commentary on humanity not so humbly begging for forgiveness... kinda, sorta, maybe... A fine and profound wright Good Sir... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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Aarzoo Mehek 08 July 2020

An introspect within is what we need sometimes To rule out the concequences of this world. May god forgive Our sins and accept our prayers. Beautiful poem.

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