Adventure Tours In Appreciation Poem by Terence George Craddock

Adventure Tours In Appreciation

Rating: 3.5


sometimes your best is not enough
sometimes your best is not good enough
sometimes your best is not appreciated - enough

adventure tours in appreciation tunnels
slog up steep cliffs climb through dark caves
adventure tours in company perspectives

legendary Moa forgot how to fly extinct
fossils emotive life decisions entomb delete
millions of years elapse embrace star flight


Terence George Craddock (Afterglows Echoes Of Starlight)
Copyright © Terence George Craddock

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Split image from the poem 'Sky High Dreams Forgotten Deceased', by the poet Terence George Craddock. Written in January 2014 on the 4.1.2014.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 11 December 2016

This is an intriguing piece. The whole concept of Adventure Tours in Appreciation is such a compelling and innovative theme, I almost wish the piece was longer to explore that more. It does not, of course, leave the reader feeling like the piece is incomplete, because your last stanza reaches back into the mists of antiquity, then outward to the stars themselves, producing a massive context of contemplation far beyond the brevity of the writing. Again, very intriguing. Thank you.

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