A Walk In The Park Poem by Deluke Muwanigwa

A Walk In The Park

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A walk in the park
Is not a walk in the dark
The dark is the dark
Things happen in the dark
The same things can happen in a park
The park could be dark
A WALK IN THE PARK DEPENDS
The park could be dark
The same things can happen in a park
Things happen in the dark
The dark is the dark
Is not a walk in the dark
A walk in the park

Saturday, November 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

I wrote the poem 'A Dark Nighttime Park Is Not The Same As A Daytime Park', inspired by the poem 'A Walk In The Park', by the poet Deluke Muwanigwa and dedicated to Deluke Muwanigwa.

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Varsha M 21 November 2020

Dark and park are not same. Things in dark can go wrong. A park can be in dark but dark can never become park which is beautiful.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 November 2020

Dark is dark if a path goes thru it then there found some footprints - o it's walk and the lights there start to enlighten after frequent walking

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Terry Craddock 21 November 2020

P2 a walk in the park can be a walk in the dark but it will not be like a walk in the daytime a walk in the park can be a walk in the dark but it will not be a walk in the same park as the daytime a walk in the park can be a walk in the dark but it will not be as friendly crowded or safe as daytime

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Terry Craddock 21 November 2020

P1 A Dark Nighttime Park Is Not The Same As A Daytime Park a walk in the park can be a sunrise walk at dawn but not if we get up late arrive after the dawn a walk in the park can be an early morning stroll but it is not an early morning run up with the sun a walk in the park can be a midday walk in the sun but not if it is cloudy or raining or not a midday walk a walk in the park can be a sunset walk at days end but not if we are too early or to late for the sunset

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