A Symbol Of Pride Poem by Afzal Shauq

A Symbol Of Pride

Rating: 4.9


Oh Pisa tower
through the ages
miraculously standing
a symbol of pride
though condemnation threatens
And perhaps one day
you shall kiss the soil.

Majestic tower
made famous by leaning.
The passage of time
unbalanced you,
But still you stand
forever stalwart.
Honor of your country.
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Poem In Pashto By: Afzal Shauq
Translated in English By: Alley Boling
Book: 'TWIST OF FATES' Poem No.110/Page.153
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Poet's weblog: www.tolafghan.com/members/afzalshauq
© Afzal Shauq

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
AkosiDArk Sugbuanon 13 July 2009

such a wonderful meaning and powerful words! ! ! i liked the concept of the poem....nice poem sir jhee...

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Alandra Moreira 24 July 2009

I love how you use reality to describe reality, and the image of pride in a building of great... can't find the word...I want to say a building of great acknowledgement for it is well known, instead of a human of small significance... that was the word a building of great significance... also I love how you used the world stalwart to comprehensate pride. Very well thought, placed, and worded. It is the kind of poem that you can't figure out by just reading the first line or stanze, you have to read it all and as you read it its wording just takes you away...

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Marieta Maglas 03 August 2009

The poem belongs to symbolism, in the architectural sense, because of the visual association between an object, Pisa tower, and the thoughts of a pride man. At the same time the architecture's visual language is less flexible and it is more powerful, by making the poem to be excellent...10+++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 August 2009

yeap the symbol of pride bloomed here beautifully! excellent work out! 10+

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Sameera Sameer 19 September 2009

I'm proud of u man! ! ! I LOVED IT <3 WOOOOOOOOOOW well done I couldnt stop reading

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Wahab Abdul 07 October 2012

lovely, sweet flow and great tribute to the tower!

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Irina Minaeva 06 May 2010

A very unusual and deep poem.

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Kathryn Brookins 02 May 2010

You are a very good writer, and I have enjoyed reading your poems.. so touching, so insightful and deepness inside of you shows.... I can see how you see, you touch the imagination and florish the minds sight... Very well done indeed.. You are gifted and talented and rich in your words.. I am honored to be able to read your poetry... thank you..

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Maria Junnonen 02 May 2010

When I read the title I really couldn´t imagine it to be Pisa´s Tower but really.... It was quite short and still held its imaginary feeling.

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Jesse Palma 17 April 2010

great poem and so symbolic in itself

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