A Flower In The Charlotine Times Poem by Nika McGuin

A Flower In The Charlotine Times

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She lay there
like a wilted flower
unrecognizable, as the person I'd known

The woman I knew,
was a beautiful flower
full of charm, full of sass,
but most of all - full of heart

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Nine months of weekly visits
warm embraces and stories shared
in the charlotine times
'but joy is brief, as summer's fun'
and malleable memory, is all that remains

An old voicemail, the gifts you gave me
I'll cherish them - and hoard them
the way you hoarded so many things
I only wish, I'd kept more of them
I only wish, I'd called more

If I had known
the end was so near
I would have...

Now I only wish, you
were still here

To Momo Charlotte with love,
May you R.I.P.
~ Your grandaughter

Thursday, October 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death,grief ,loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 24 October 2015

Who among us has not had such feelings - if only I had known - if only I had visited more often - if only.... Your poem speaks for all of us. But I don't want to dwell on the IF ONLY theme. The time we DID spend with all of THEM in our many lives, was time well-spent and fulfilled the bond we have with aged relatives. The fact that you wrote this poem and I relate to it speaks eloquently of family ties.

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