# #a Finished Scenario Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# #a Finished Scenario

Rating: 3.6


a finished life scenario
a book given long ago
we stick to it all along
not seeing what's going on
how that becomes your life

each and every one of us
each and every moment going by
gives and takes something from us
A FINISHED AND OVER TRUTH
THERE NEVER WAS

each and every one.....
carries with him...THE TRUTH
each and every moment...
carries with it...THE TRUTH

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 05 October 2009

Great piece... sending a great message about TRUTH... its importance...its impact to our being human the truth of our existence... the book of Truth....and how we will accept it... 'each and every one..... carries with him...THE TRUTH each and every moment... carries with it...THE TRUTH' i love this verses....send a great impact...great message... ...we are the Truth of God's wisdom... thanks for sharing this, Sam 10+++++++ Lovelots, Maia

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Ency Bearis 07 October 2009

a good insightful poem with virtues to ponder...a great piece...10

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David Harris 07 October 2009

Samanyan, quite a few people and I am one of them believe that our lives are preordained from the moment of our birth to the moment when we die and are resurrected as someone or something else to learn more. Your poem expresses truth that we should all live by, our own truth. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. All the best David

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Nalini Hebbar 08 October 2009

truth...a bitter pill...but how many of us understand it? ...great read

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 October 2009

well written, the flow is good shan

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 17 October 2009

An interesting observation on truth…succinctly made. Truth is indivisible and an eternal continuum.

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Vandavasu Vittal 16 October 2009

One gets to know the truth at the last part before he goes to old nick or almighty god. Thanks for sharing this poem sir.

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Patrick A. Martin 16 October 2009

To thine own self be true and that truth will set you free. -10

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Antonio Liao 16 October 2009

it's the last lines that makes the finale of everything...of all wisdom that life is but a truth to live......marvelous truth of life....a 10 ++++ God bless

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Antonio Liao 16 October 2009

it's the last lines that makes the finale of everything...of all wisdom that life is but a truth to live......marvelous truth of life....a 10 ++++ God bless

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