Tuesday, March 27, 2007

A Baby's View Of Comments

Rating: 4.2
I came as tomorrow
Swaddled in unawareness
To your warm womb
Mother……

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Anvesha Agrawal 09 January 2021
So beautifully written for baby, s explained about what they fell in their mother, s womb
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MARTIN GREYFORD 26 September 2020
Absolutely profound and prolific writing 10
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Anjandev Roy 07 July 2020
This is absolutely superb......thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.
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Varsha M 08 June 2020
Beautifully written from a baby's point of view. What he feels inside the womb. What is unfinished creation- a precipitation of blood became my transcendence. Before love grew.. very sad truth but this is very true. Appreciations.
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A. Madhavan 15 May 2020
Many years ago, I imagined an unborn baby as a possible fellow-creature in this unfinished earth, this 'janma', as we figure it.
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Magadha Rani 15 February 2020
I came as tomorrow Swaddled in unawareness To your warm womb Mother……Great expression! A great poem dear poet.........10++++++
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Kesav Easwaran 25 January 2020
Great dedication to motherhood. Sweet poem.10+
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Anjandev Roy 05 January 2020
Profound write. Fine to read. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 January 2020
Dear Poet Yoonoos, This is a fabulous poem. Yes, we do come into this world without a choice totally unaware. We leave this world also without a hint of its time. Yet, we strive and make effort to live a life while it lasts. Wishing you a wonderful year of joy and peace........10
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Ms Doubtfire 29 December 2019
Loved it, what would we be without our mothers?
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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 18 October 2019
Marvelous! ! I rate 10+ Thanks for sharing.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 21 September 2019
A baby's view of abortion-very well penned.
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A B Faniki 05 September 2019
Intriguing poem. Thanks for sharing
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2019
I came as tomorrow Swaddled in unawareness To your warm womb Mother……touching expression. A Baby's View Of...is a brilliant poem that attracts the poets and poetesses to read over and over again.Thank you again dear Yoonoos for sharing this poem.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 June 2019
What is unfinished creation- A precipitation of blood Became my transcendence...great expression! A great poem that drags me to read it again and again!
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Anjandev Roy 31 May 2019
Without your choice Or mine.....wonderful poem. Absolute gem. Thanks. Anjandev Roy.
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Mahtab Bangalee 07 May 2019
wow what a great poetic expression- With time Our human tree But before love Grew into flesh and words What is unfinished creation-...//// fabulous piece of poem
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Kyvin Nash 30 April 2019
Baby's view... Great poetry, painful and real.
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Gurjeet kaur bhatiani 30 April 2019
The Way to The Sea Coast-Excellent reading.
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Oluwatosin Thomas 18 April 2019
I salute you, this us really good. always in line. You deserve a medal
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